Thank you very much! Yes, thoughts need action; perhaps not all of them indiscriminately, but those that are very pressing probably do. I love your interpretation of my lines — they are ambiguous, so anyone can choose to what end to perceive them, and I do like your view.
I know! You guessed right, it was me describing sleeplessness, and it is very frustrating, as you clearly know. Here’s to a good night’s sleep then! Zzz…
Thank you for stopping by and leaving such an appreciative comment. It means a lot to me. Have a great day and no black pressing thoughts like those described above!
Love the wordplay in the last three lines: “… That needs a break not to break down.” I think giving the word “down” a line by itself was also extremely effective, as it created a sudden dip when I was reading the poem in my head. And a “sudden dip” is exactly what happens when we break down! 😊
Thank you very much, Yusra, for your kind comment — it helps a lot that you told me specifically what worked for you! And yes, I admit that I was consciously going for this effect of a sudden dip reminiscent of a breakdown, so I’m glad that it worked for you. Thanks for stopping by and have a nice day with no breakdowns!
You make perfect sense, my kitty wife 😉 Thank you for all. Things are looking up for me, and no bad thoughts anywhere to be seen! Yay 😀 I wish you the same.
hah you do make me laugh and thank you. I had about 4 inchs of hair cut off today so Lucile wanted proof of my haircut then demanded, no suggested hehe that i use the pic as my new avatar pic, so being oh so obedient I did as she said lolol ho ho ho hehe x
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Very apposite.
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Thank you. It is probably apposite for a range of life situations, in my particular case it was a bout of sleeplessness… A somewhat longer bout.
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Oh, I know what you mean about sleeplessness. Yet, (not but) sometimes to be sleepless whilst others sleep brings its own reward.
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LLBS at “yet (not but)” — as you wish! 😉 And I see what you mean. Good.
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I think you have captured well the all-consuming feeling of a thought that needs action.
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Thank you very much! Yes, thoughts need action; perhaps not all of them indiscriminately, but those that are very pressing probably do. I love your interpretation of my lines — they are ambiguous, so anyone can choose to what end to perceive them, and I do like your view.
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This exactly describes how I feel some nights when trying to sleep. It’s infuriating! You’ve said it so eloquently…
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I know! You guessed right, it was me describing sleeplessness, and it is very frustrating, as you clearly know. Here’s to a good night’s sleep then! Zzz…
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This speaks to me. Thank you.
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Thank you for stopping by and leaving such an appreciative comment. It means a lot to me. Have a great day and no black pressing thoughts like those described above!
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Love the wordplay in the last three lines: “… That needs a break not to break down.” I think giving the word “down” a line by itself was also extremely effective, as it created a sudden dip when I was reading the poem in my head. And a “sudden dip” is exactly what happens when we break down! 😊
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Thank you very much, Yusra, for your kind comment — it helps a lot that you told me specifically what worked for you! And yes, I admit that I was consciously going for this effect of a sudden dip reminiscent of a breakdown, so I’m glad that it worked for you. Thanks for stopping by and have a nice day with no breakdowns!
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You are most welcome! 😊 It was a great poem. I hope you have a very lovely day too! ❤️
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Oh, thank you very much, you are too kind!
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Indeed some great and complicated thoughts.
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Thank you very much for your appreciative comment. It means a lot to me. Have a pleasant day and no overwhelming thoughts!
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A thought swirling in a mind that cannot let it go, but overfull with all of the other thoughts. 😀
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You put it wonderfully. Thank you. Seriously.
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I get this and hope you are getting what you need, i am not sure if this makes sense, i am sensing the space and head clearing needed xx
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You make perfect sense, my kitty wife 😉 Thank you for all. Things are looking up for me, and no bad thoughts anywhere to be seen! Yay 😀 I wish you the same.
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yay well that sounds perfect my Kitty Wife ❤ Can't wait to hear more xx
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Good! Photos of my new flat furnished and settled are on your WhatsApp now 😉
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I saw, and thank you 😉 xx
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O.M.G.!! You’re looking happier and happier! I’m now referring to your new Avatar. It’s overwhelmingly beautiful! ❤
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hah you do make me laugh and thank you. I had about 4 inchs of hair cut off today so Lucile wanted proof of my haircut then demanded, no suggested hehe that i use the pic as my new avatar pic, so being oh so obedient I did as she said lolol ho ho ho hehe x
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Perfect! Lucile was right to convince you to make this lovely new photo your avatar!!
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hah thank you 😉
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