Dis
connected from me
Un
connected from my
self
Follow-Up
My modest poem has inspired verse responses by creative fellow bloggers, which turned out to be much better than the original! Check it out below, in order of appearance:
By Ronovan
Dis
enchanted with me
Dis
enchanted with my
self
By Mother Hen
En
Tranced with your writing
In
Spired by this haiku…
By Julie
Be
Comes the time to empty the trash
To
morrow is garbage pick-up day
Mara Eastern 
Dis
enchanted with me
Dis
enchanted with my
self
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Whew, this is a characteristically underappreciative but a lovely response by you! Thanks a lot for completing my bad poem with a much better one 😉
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It was actually a compliment of being inspired by yours to write this one.
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En
Tranced with your writing
In
Spired by this haiku…
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Ha! That’s adorable, flattering and inspiring… Thanks for playing with me! 😉
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Be
Comes the time to empty the trash
To
morrow is garbage pick-up day
Sorry. The best I could do….
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Oohh, this is genius!! I love the most tongue-in-cheek down-to-earth poems, and this has just become my new favourite! Thanks so much for making my day 😀
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Grinning ear to ear. Thanks Mara!
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Actually, I added all the three lovely creations that I received as response, including yours, in my post and retweeted it 🙂
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Sweet!
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Such a great poem. Very creative. Fits perfectly with them whole theme of it. I wonder where people who write poetry get their ideas from 🙂
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Ah, that’s just a silly wordplay by me, but the poems contributed by fellow bloggers in the comments here are pretty awesome! I must ask them where they take their inspiration… I get mine from not being able to fall asleep, this is when I amuse myself by putting together silly verses…
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This was so interesting to read ! Such a unique idea Mara 🙂
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I doubt it a unique idea on my part, I’m almost sure I unwittingly stole it from somewhere… But it was huge fun how it turned out! Thanks for reading and thanks for your encouraging comments, as always!
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hah that is great, i love the interraction from your other blogger followers x
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Me too! I’ve got a wonderful bunch of readers, you including! ❤
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awe thank you x
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Very clever. I’m normally not a big poetry person, but yours are cool.
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I’m normally not a big poetry person either, I have no idea what possessed me to produce poems myself… If we call it “poems” at all 😉 Thanks a lot for reading!
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